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7 Famous (or should be) First Lines

by Chautona Havig · 13 Comments

There it is, a shiny new book, or perhaps an old, crusty one.  You crack it open to the first page of chapter one and read: “Who is John Galt?” You know, the minute you read those words, that something about it is important, but you can’t possibly know what.  So you’re left wondering.  And that works the magic of excellent first lines–they capture your attention.

7 famous first lines

First lines often set the entire tone of a book.

You can see it in books like Twilight by Stephenie Meyer where the opening line, in first-person, says something about how she’d never considered how she’d die.  Considering it’s a book about those who have essentially died–but didn’t–it definitely sets the tone. Like the example above from Ayn Rand’s Atlas Shrugged, neither of those quotes are, in my not-so-humble opinion, “Great first lines” that should be recognized as such by everyone.

And perhaps the ones I nominate here aren’t grand enough for more intellectual or literary tastes, but they’re my favorites.  Some are fairly well-known.  Others, not so much.  But all of them gripped me from the moment I read them and I wanted to share them with you. However, I find it most interesting, however, that some of, if not most of my absolute favorite books of all time have fairly nondescript opening lines.

Note:  Just because the book is listed, doesn’t mean I recommend it without caveat.  It just had an opening line that gripped me and stuck with me.

Counting down from seven…

7.    “Where’s Papa going with that ax?” said Fern to her mother as they were setting the table for breakfast.  (Charlotte’s Web by E.B. White)

This one has such a fabulous juxtaposition of  bright sunniness (breakfast tables always feel bright and sunny to me) with an ominous undertone.  Brilliant.

6.    “There were crimson roses on the bench; they looked like splashes of blood.”  (Strong Poison by Dorothy Sayers)

While it’s not an incredibly crafted sentence that leaves you gaping breathless at its literary genius, the words paint a cruel picture considering the book opens in a courtroom where Harriet Vane is being tried for murder.  With just a few words, it hints at murder and innocence (blood and roses).  Beyond brilliant.  (I recommend the BBC “movie“ with Peter Etheridge and Harriet Walker, btw.  LOVE Lord Peter played by Etheridge)

5.    “The human race, to which so many of my readers belong, has been playing at children’s games from the beginning, and will probably do it till the end, which is a nuisance for the few people who grow up.” (Napoleon of Notting Hill by G.K. Chesterton)

Okay, while I don’t think Chesterton would recognize his line in the way I see it, I can’t help but read it as, “Some people never leave junior high, and that gets OLD for those who did.”

Slightly more literary…

4.    “No one who had ever seen Catherine Morland in her infancy would have supposed her born to be an heroine.”  (Northanger Abbey by Jane Austen)

Can you imagine reading that line about yourself when you were, say, ninety?  Especially looking back on your life and seeing how silly you were as a young thing?

3.    “To say that I met Nicholas Brisbane over my husband’s dead body is not entirely accurate. Edward, it should be noted, was still twitching upon the floor.” (Silent in the Grave by Deanna Raybourn)

An online friend shared this (technically “these”) line(s).  I immediately went looking for the author and bought a whole set of her books.  Anyone who can write that line should get paid for it–even if I never have time to read the books!

2.    “My day didn’t start with murder, although the thought crossed my mind.”  (Fool’s Puzzle by Earlene Fowler)

Hands down, my favorite opening line (and scene) in any book I’ve read as an adult.  The next lines go something like, “She picked up the phone, and an ominous voice whispered, “Help!”  And if you want to know what happens next, you’ll have to read the book.

But the BEST first line EVER…

1.    “There was a boy called Eustace Clarence Scrubb, and he almost deserved it.”  (Voyage of the Dawn Treader by C.S. Lewis)

This thrills my heart every time I think of it.

This list made me consider what I think of my own books.

I really want that for my books–opening lines that resonate with the reader and stay.  I mean, the reason I chose   C. S. Lewis’ quote from The Voyage of the Dawn Treader as my number one quote is because it’s the one I quote to my children all the time when I’m talking about amazing writing.

This, of course, then made me wonder which of mine I would consider the best I’ve done.  I went through everything I have–in print and not–and frankly, was disappointed in most of the opening lines.  My only consolation is that, as I said earlier, most of my favorite books have singularly uninspiring opening lines.  So it works.  But, after looking at every single line of over a hundred manuscripts (most of them partial, yes!), I came up with two favorites.  I can’t decide which I prefer, but since one is in print and one isn’t–one is “youth fiction” and the other isn’t, I decided to share both.

My best first lines:

dcjsmcoverimage“As Kaye Harper waited, her nerves danced a jitterbug through her heart, stomach, and hands.” (Confessions of a De-cluttering Junkie)

and

Tales of the Ashdowne“Stories that have happy endings often have dismal beginnings. And this is one such tale.”  (Tales of the Ashdowne)

(Yes, I realize that the last one is technically two lines, but proper grammar would have them as one, so I think it still counts.  Why penalize the book because of a stylistic punctuation choice?)

I’m curious, though… what is your all-time favorite opening line?  I’d love to hear more.  I find them fascinating.

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  1. Lucinda Culp says

    February 15, 2017 at 8:15 pm

    “If it had not rained on a certain May morning Valancy Stirling’s whole life would have been entirely different”
    The Blue Castle by Lucy Maude Montgomery

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    • Chautona Havig says

      February 16, 2017 at 3:51 pm

      I love the book, but that only slightly grabs as a top 10 for me.

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      • Lucinda Culp says

        February 16, 2017 at 4:31 pm

        LOL! Perhaps on your 40th read, or somewhere in that neighborhood, it’ll move higher on the list. For me, it signals the beginning of a wonderful journey with an old friend. I have it now on my Kindle Fire, but my annual reading must be done via my personal, very old copy. Thinking it’s about that time again…

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        • Chautona Havig says

          February 16, 2017 at 10:22 pm

          Oh, it does to me, too. But that’s only because I’ve read it. If I hadn’t read it before, it would just be, “Hmm… interesting.” Not, “WHAT???? WHY??? and force me to read it again.

          And I wouldn’t be surprised at all to discover I’ve read it at least 40 times. Hee hee.

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          • Lucinda Culp says

            February 17, 2017 at 5:43 am

            Admittedly, it doesn’t grab you and shout “READ ME!”…but few books are blessed with the power of an opening line like “It was a dark and stormy night”…
            As an author, it would be difficult, figuring out how to grab a potential reader in that opening sentence, yet you’ve performed that task multiple times. I know I’m always excited to get into your books!

  2. Kamely says

    February 9, 2015 at 6:11 am

    “It is a truth universally acknowledge, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” (Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen.)

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  3. Juliet says

    February 4, 2015 at 12:00 pm

    Our Mother-Daughter book club played an opening lines game once. DawnTreader, Harry Potter and Peter Pan were all favorites, along with Christmas Carol (“Marley was dead to begin with.”) And A Wrinkle in Time (“It was a dark and stormy night”). One I’ve never forgotten is Rebecca’s “Last night I dreamt we went to Manderley.”

    Reply
    • Chautona says

      February 4, 2015 at 12:31 pm

      Rebecca is another one that almost made the final list. I almost tried to talk Kevin into naming one of our girls Manderly.

      Reply
  4. Laura says

    February 4, 2015 at 11:43 am

    “It was a dark and stormy night”…. Snoopy’s famous beginning…

    Reply
  5. Deborah G says

    February 4, 2015 at 9:45 am

    I feel like I should say something like “In the beginning. . .” but I am going to go with the one from a childhood favorite.
    “All children, except one, grow up.”
    J.M. Barrie: Peter Pan (1911)
    Then again, that is just the opening line for a favorite book, not necessarily a favorite opening line.
    “Mr. and Mrs. Dursley of number four, Privet Drive, were proud to say that they were perfectly normal, thank you very much.”
    J.K. Rowling: Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone
    I just knew that as proud as they were to be normal, something not normal was going on.

    Reply
    • Chautona says

      February 4, 2015 at 11:47 am

      I almost chose the Harry Potter one and made it 8 opening lines! How funny!

      Reply
  6. MS Barb says

    February 4, 2015 at 9:35 am

    When you have time, definitely read Earlene Fowler’s quilting mystery books!

    Reply
    • Chautona says

      February 4, 2015 at 11:48 am

      ARen’t they awesome! I love Dove! Benni isn’t so bad herself. 😉

      Reply

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I had a chat with actor and author Henry O. Arnold a while back, and boy did we have a lot of fun. His Song of Prophets and Kings series features the advent of Israel’s kings from Samuel’s birth through David hiding from Saul (so far) and onward. Listen in as we chat about his most recent release, The Singer of Israel.

 

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What Made David Such a Man after God’s Heart?

I think this series will show us. I love that Henry O. Arnold started back at Samuel’s story to prepare us for the story of arguably the most influential king of Israel. Yes, Solomon was the wisest and richest, but David offered something that Solomon didn’t have. He was an average guy—a shepherd, no less—chosen by God to lead his country.

In a sense, it’s kind of the ancient Jewish version of a poor, everyday guy growing up to become President of the United States. If you know what I mean.

This five-book series is available as an eBook, in print, and as an audiobook, too! Henry read a snippet of it to us, and boy you get a feel for his love of Scripture and God’s people as he reads.

And if that wasn’t enough, he even gave us a hint of his upcoming Christian suspense/thriller “series. He says he has two books planned for sure, so… at least a duology, but maybe we can talk him into a trilogy at least? Get those odd numbers and everything?

The Singer of Israel by Henry O. Arnold

A singer’s voice inspires a troubled nation…A shepherd’s courage vanquishes a giant

The last official act of the prophet of Yahweh was to secretly anoint a replacement for the king of Israel who has been brought low by an unbalanced mind. The great prophet of Israel lives in fear of the wrath of the king. Then out of the hills of Bethlehem emerges the last-born son of a family of shepherds to become the unforeseen hero of Israel.

When David sings of the glory of Yahweh, this shepherd wins the hearts of the royal family and restores King Saul’s troubled mind. But when the singer/shepherd defeats the champion of the Philistines in single combat, David becomes forever known as “the giant slayer.” Saul quickly sees that David is now a threat to his kingdom and secretly plots to have him killed.

David may be the champion of the people of Israel, but he must live under the constant threat of Saul’s wrath until he is finally forced to flee for his life.

The Singer of Israel is a tale of triumph and tribulation, deepest love, and burning rivalries; the new epoch is given a voice…and it is The Song of Prophets and Kings.

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