I’m planning a book for this summer. It’s going to be a 30 day project. Already it is very well plotted and ready to go, but I have one character that I need to work on a bit more. In an allegory–Pilgrim’s Progress perhaps– her name would be Unctuous. In case you don’t know which definition I plan to use, let me give you a good definition of what I mean.
unc·tu·ous (adjective)
1. characterized by excessive piousness or moralistic fervor, especially in an affected manner; excessively smooth, suave, or smug.
I have a character that needs to be believably unctuous. That isn’t as easy as it sounds. A touch too much, and she’s unbelievable. A bit too little, and you have a woman who is just “on fire for the Lord.” I need a Pharisee that makes Saul of Tarsus look like a slacker.
Unctuous. It’s a horrible sounding word. I wish my father had used it when I was a kid instead of self-righteous. I mean, at least self-righteous has that positive sound of “righteous” mingled with the ickiness of “self” in there. Unctuous is just… ugh. There’s another “U” word for you.
U is for Unctuous–UGH!
Dawn says
Hope you hit the Unctuous “sweet spot” for your character! What a good word.
And, did you say 30 day project? You go, girl!
Rebekah says
That sounds an interesting word! An interesting character too… the kind that kind of drives me nuts sometimes. 😀
A 30 day challenge? I’m sure you’ll have fun! 😀
To the KING be all the glory!
Rebekah
Billie A Williams (@BillieAWilliams) says
Boy do I love new words and this one is especially poignant — yes, it’s hard to keep your characters on the fine thin line that makes them believable and likeable. I heard the dreaded – “Your character is too stupid to live” one time as a new author — crushed me, but I finally got back up. LOL
Good job.
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Fareeda Alhady says
All the best for the 30-day challenge and Unctuous!