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What Makes Presumption & Partiality So Great, Anyway?

by Chautona Havig · 11 Comments

“We’re doing retellings of Austen’s works but set in America during the Depression.”

Over Facebook messenger, Rebekah Jones told me how she’d been given Pride and Prejudice as her inspiration. All I could think of was, When’ll it be done? I’ve got to read this!

“I think I’ll make Darcy part Navajo…”

About that point, I’m pretty sure I asked when it would be done.

Years passed. No, really. Years. I thought I’d go out of my mind with the little tidbits she shared now and then. Because you see, I sensed something as she hashed out names, plot devices, and which scenes to rewrite from the original and which to create instead.

This was going to be a great book.

What Makes Presumption & Partiality So Great, Anyway?

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What Makes Presumption & Partiality So Great, Anyway?

One could argue that the reason I loved this book was simply because it’s a familiar story. Who doesn’t love Pride & Prejudice? Elizabeth, who goes by Eloise in this book, Darcy (Sidney), and the gang all appear, and you easily recognize every one of them.

But that’s not why I loved it. I loved the book because every single one of those people stayed true to their original characters while, at the same time, were original as shown by Miss Jones. The behavior and the attitudes remained the same for most characters. Motivations, however, shifted. We learn compassion for characters we’ve delighted to hate—even as they still annoy us.

What is most fascinating is that there’s a purpose to the changes in motivation. It’s not just to make that person “better” or “worse.”  She does it to highlight character growth in other characters. Seriously, it was brilliantly done.

Working with another author’s characters can be a difficult prospect. Miss Jones attacked that and managed to make this story completely her own. We enter the Depression-era desert with its harsh, dusty landscape and everything changes while remaining the same.

Deviations?

I’m sure there are those who will criticize the author for how and where she deviated from the original, but honestly, it’s unjust to do it. Why? Because you cannot take the exact same characters, the exact plot, drop them into a different era… a different country, and not have slight deviations. The story would have been ridiculous had she not.

Not to mention… really? How boring! I’ve READ the original. If I want P&P exactly as Austen wrote it, I’ll read Austen!

Now, I should confess that I did worry about two things. First, I have an unholy horror of preachiness in fiction, and with the themes in the story, I knew it would be tempting for Miss Jones to sermonize. But she didn’t. Perhaps if the setting had been today, a few places might have been a tad over the line, but for the time and setting, I thought she balanced spiritual discussions in a very natural way.

And I was concerned about anachronisms.

They bother me (and many of my readers), so I wondered how many I’d find. Let’s face it. No matter how careful you are to look up everything you can possibly imagine being too modern, it’s easy to miss something. Slang? She nailed it. The common ones and at least one that I’ve only seen in lists when looking up stuff for my own writing. Diction? Also pretty much bang-on. I do recall something minor once, but since I can’t remember what that was, I suspect it was minor.

The only thing I found that I’m not confident on was the missing inhaler. While there were inhalers created before 1955, they were more like nebulizers and much bulkier than our modern inhalers. To leave one just “lying around” and it be lost… not as likely. Still, really? That’s it? If I recall correctly, yes. That’s it. And technically it is possible.

For the picky, there are a dozen or so minor typos, but I suspect she’ll have those corrected in no time if they haven’t already been. After all, I purchased this on launch day a few months ago. I suspect those are gone now.

So, do I really think it’s a great book?

Actually, yeah. I do. I bought it the day it came out and I’ve been hoarding it for a while. Miss Jones made me love her take on the characters in Presumption and Partiality. I find myself thinking about the clever ways she brought in parts of a world I know!

Gilbert, Arizona isn’t that far from Phoenix, Mesa, and Apache Junction. I lived there as a girl. Williams isn’t that far from Flagstaff where I spent a lot of time as well. My grandparents were cotton farmers during the depression (although in Oklahoma, rather than Arizona). I know this world she wrote in. And I felt like I was there.

But beyond the familiar, what I think I love most is the rich depth she brought to her characters, the spiritual lessons she taught me, and the eagerness she’s created in me to read the others in the Vintage Austen Series. I think Emmeline will be next…

To learn more about the Vintage Austen Collection, visit their WEBSITE and see which of Austen’s other works are set in Depression Era America.

 

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  1. Bree Herron says

    April 28, 2018 at 10:38 pm

    I liked this book too! It was a different take from how authors have approached doing Austen. Great Thoughts!

    Reply
    • Chautona Havig says

      April 29, 2018 at 2:57 am

      It’s fun, isn’t it? 😀

      Reply
  2. Esther Filbrun says

    April 28, 2018 at 4:20 am

    This is the one book out of the collection that I haven’t read yet (well, besides the short story collection!) I’m seriously considering buying it eventually, though, as it just doesn’t seem right to leave it at that. 🙂 Emmeline was one of my favorites–either that, or Suit and Suitability, although I enjoyed Perception too! Thanks for sharing–this may have just been bumped up a little higher on my to-buy list. 🙂

    Reply
  3. Eileen says

    April 27, 2018 at 6:11 am

    Rebekah told me about this book a few years ago, too, and I’m glad to hear such good things about it. I definitely want to read this story!

    Reply
  4. Andrea Stoeckel says

    April 26, 2018 at 6:26 pm

    Jane Austen reworks? Sounds fascinating enough to try them

    Reply
  5. Helen Carol Collett says

    April 26, 2018 at 2:29 pm

    I would love to win the complete set of the Vintage Jane Austen Collection.

    Reply
  6. NZ Filbruns says

    April 26, 2018 at 12:09 pm

    I really must read this one soon! It sounds so good.

    Reply
    • Chautona Havig says

      April 26, 2018 at 4:04 pm

      It really is!

      Reply
  7. Karin says

    April 26, 2018 at 7:39 am

    I am an Arizona native, although I have lived in other countries and all over the United States, I always return home. I am an avid reader of Christian fiction (and non-fiction) and am most intrigued when someone bases their stories/novels in Arizona! I will definitely be checking this book out at the library if it is offered!

    Reply
  8. Barbie D says

    April 26, 2018 at 7:25 am

    I read a lot growing up & am still an avid reader, but I’ve never read any of Austen’s books, and I don’t know why! (Could it be b/c I grew up in a large inner city school system?) Time to remedy this! 🙂

    Reply
    • Chautona Havig says

      April 26, 2018 at 7:27 am

      Pride and Prejudice is where to start. It’s really one of the first truly modern novels. It’s amazing how similarly it’s written to today’s novels compared to other things written at that time (including Austen’s other works)

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