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What Do I Think of This Biblical Retelling?

by Chautona Havig · 12 Comments

Sorry for the delay in getting this up.  Fell asleep while writing last night.  Hope that’s because my sleep cycle is messed up and not because I am writing something that boring.  Eeep!

So… retellings.  They’re popular.  Just think about how many Cinderella retellings there are out there! Currently, Austen retellings are the craze—contemporary, continuing-story, and even one set that takes place in 1930s United States.  Dickens retellings are fun and becoming more popular…

And then there are Biblical retellings.  Although those aren’t as popular, I recall one about Jesus coming to earth in the late 19th century and how that would have affected the world if it had happened then.  Good book, actually.  Esther is a popular story in these, as is Isaac and Rebekah.

Of all, though, Ruth and Boaz’s story is probably the most common.

A few months ago, I came across a new book—Shadow Among Sheaves. It would be a retelling of Ruth and Boaz in mid-nineteenth-century England, with “Ruth” being a young woman from India. I immediately requested a review copy.

Shadow Among Sheaves review

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What Do I Think of This Biblical Retelling?

Will you forgive me if I say I don’t know?  I really don’t. So, I think I’m going to just give you the good, the bad, and the verdict. Maybe that’ll help me sort out my thoughts.

The good:

  • Brilliant writing. Seriously, this woman can spin a lovely tale that holds your attention and keeps you wanting more.
  • Ms. Stephens knows how to write a consistent character who holds your interest.  Even Lord Barric, who is rather erratic, is consistent in being so.
  • The story is interesting, compelling, holds your attention for the most part, and does it all without being pretentious. One of the best things that Naomi Stephens did was to stick to the spirit of Ruth and Boaz rather than attempt recreating the exact story in two cultures so very different from the original cultures.

The bad:

    • This is more of a warning for others than my problem. I read a paperback that was not marked ARC, which might be why I didn’t have some of the problems others did. I also could have gotten interrupted at just the right moment so I missed it.  But supposedly there is an idiom of the time that uses the word “bastard.”  This is not used in a swearing way—but rather in a common speech way.  It would have been said, at the time, in mixed company.

I caught sight of a use of hell, and while I don’t remember the exact place, I do remember thinking, “Well, she didn’t use it for swearing.”   Still, some people are complaining that the book has unnecessary language in it.  So, I either missed it because of having to start and stop so much, OR… they had ARCS (which I suspect) and it was all removed later.

  • Lord Barric/Boaz. I didn’t like him.  The whole time I felt like a likable, relatable Barric was right on the edge… just hovering there.  But he didn’t arrive. I suspect this is due to the character wrestling against caring for someone who will bring censure on his title.  The guy is an Earl.  This is a real concern for him.  However, this deviated so far from the part of the real story that I was disappointed.  See, Boaz is my favorite character in God’s version of this story.  He wasn’t in Ms. Stephens’s.
  • The vitriol.

Look, I know she needed to show us just how badly Rena would be treated in Victorian society, but Ms. Stephens did treat us to a lot of reminders of the uncouth things men would say to and about her. Instead of making me sympathetic to her, it just got wearisome.

  • The proposition: Where Rena has to offer herself to Barric’s family (not a spoiler. We know it has to happen some way) is where the entire story broke down for me.   I’ve seen reviews talk about it—how “racy” it and the post-marriage scenes were.  While they are more sensual than some books, I wasn’t actually uncomfortable, and we all know what a prude I am.

What I was uncomfortable with was the method.  It absolutely does not work for the height of the Victorian Era (right as Prince Albert dies.). What the Naomi character recommends Rena do just would not have happened.  Period.

This actually ruined the book for me. 

I promptly deducted a star for it because in a book that was so good to stick to the theme and tone of Ruth/Boaz without being too “on the nose,” that’s exactly what Ms. Stephens did there.  The scene on the threshing floor in the Bible isn’t a sexual one, but it did have the potential to ruin Ruth’s reputation if she was observed.  Perhaps that’s why the author used it so literally, but it rang untrue to me in reading Rena in Barric’s bedroom at night when there were many alternate options that would have worked in English society.

That’s what God did in His version of the story—He used the customs of the society in which Ruth and Naomi lived to play out His plan for their lives.

The verdict:

While Shadow Among Sheaves didn’t live up to its potential or my hopes, it was a good book, well written, and engaging. The spiritual content wasn’t there on Boaz’s side, which bothered me, but Rena’s saving faith felt natural and understandable as a result both of Nell (Naomi)’s example and the parson’s involvement in their lives.

All in all, I wanted to love it, but I didn’t.  I liked it, but it was just a bit above “okay.”

Still, I’ll be watching Naomi Stephens’s books in the future.  I do really enjoy her writing.

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  1. Caryl Kane says

    May 11, 2019 at 12:49 pm

    Chautona, Thank you for your honest review!

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  2. Debbie P says

    May 6, 2019 at 12:24 pm

    This sounds like a very intriguing read.

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  3. James Robert says

    May 6, 2019 at 3:18 am

    Congrats on this tour and thank for the opportunity to read about another great book out there to read. It helps out so I can find books I know my family will enjoy reading. Thanks as well for the giveaway.

    Reply
  4. Dianna says

    May 5, 2019 at 7:02 pm

    I love your reviews. They’re very thoughtful and specific without giving away too much!

    Reply
    • Chautona Havig says

      May 6, 2019 at 12:29 am

      Thank you. That’s my pet peeve–if I want a synopsis, I’ll read the publisher’s back of the book thing. I want to know WHY someone did or didn’t like it.

      Reply
  5. Becky Lewis says

    May 5, 2019 at 11:02 am

    Thank you for honesty with clarity and kindness. I am still figuring this out.

    Reply
    • Chautona Havig says

      May 5, 2019 at 3:46 pm

      I always want to be kind, and there’s no kindness in dishonesty, but there’s such a fine line sometimes because no matter how careful I may be, it doesn’t mean the other party can feel it. It’s hard to hear that someone took issue with your book.

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  6. Faith says

    May 5, 2019 at 8:44 am

    Your description of this book is exactly why I simply never read books that are Bible stories retold in a different way/era. I have tried but every time I got very frustrated with poetic license used with God’s Word. I don’t think the Bible version can be improved and don’t care to read attempts to do so. BTW–I don’t watch the movies either!

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    • Chautona Havig says

      May 5, 2019 at 3:45 pm

      This is why different eras are ones I do like! LOL. I like that it’s so removed from the real story that I never have to “remind myself” that xyz attitude or motivation was from a (Biblical fiction) book rather than scripture. In a different era, it’s not a frustration.

      That other one I mentioned was by Isabella Alden (aka “Pansy”) who was Grace Livingston Hill’s aunt. It’s called “Yesterday Framed in Today” and what she did so well was show the story by Jesus’ effect on everyone rather than showing HIM. She never brings him in as a POV character at all. I thought that was well done.

      Funny how different we all are, no?

      Reply
      • Faith says

        May 7, 2019 at 10:24 am

        Yep, we are all so different in some ways and yet so alike in others! 🙂 I don’t recall ever being on a different page than you before! I just can’t seem to separate my thoughts from the Bible story and thus my aversion to reading these books. If I could, I would probably enjoy them. I might like to try one again sometime. Any exceptional one you would recommend for me and my picky brain that might lend itself to separation from the Bible story?

        Thanks for your reply!

        Reply

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